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David Newman's avatar

‘Twas. And Mike was a great nurse. SLR, back in the day.

Tally Goldstein's avatar

The ending brought tears to my eyes. I felt traumatized by what the patient had been through and filled with empathy for how you felt. I love the way this piece was written. Your sentences are written with both style and a direct, less-is-more approach. Your “voice” was warm, inviting and inherently intelligent. Congratulations! I can’t wait to read more. xx